Single Delayed Adverb: They smiled,
delicately, like weary children remembering a party.
--John Steinbeck,
Cannery RowMultiple Delayed Adverb: He worked himself to death,
finally and
precisely, at 3:00 a.m. Sunday morning
--Ellen Goodman,
Close to HomePractice 2: Unscrambling to Imitate
In the model and the scrambled list, identify the delayed adverb. Next, unscramble and write out the sentence parts to imitate the model. Finally, write your own imitation of the model and identify and delayed adverb.
Model: As I watched him, he seemed to adjust himself a little, visibly
--F. Scott Fitzgerald,
The Great Gatsbya. a bit
b. she tried to excuse herself
c. when she told him
d. lamely
Own Sentence:Practice 3: Combining to Imitate
In the model identify the delayed adverbs. Next, combine the list of sentences to imitate the model. Finally, write your own imitation of the model and identify any delayed adverbs.
Model: The cars traveled Reynolds Streets, slowly and evenly.
--Annie Dillard,
An American Childhooda. a girl crossed a street
b. The street was Washington Avenue.
c. She crossed the street confidently.
d. And she cross the street purposefully.
Practice 4: Imitating
Identify the delayed adverbs in the models and sample imitations. Then write an imitation of each model sentence, one sentence part at a time.
1. Still winder, Smith sat up, slowly,
--Robert Ludlum,
The Moscow VectorSample: Almost finished, Peter speed up triumphantly.
Own Sentence:2. We explored the streams, quietly, where the turtles slid off the sunny logs and dug their way into the soft lake bottom.
--E.B. White "Once More to the Lake"
Sample: We walked the streets, dreamily, where the sun set in the crystal sky and melted its way over the inky black skyscrapers.
Own Sentence:3. He was clambering, heavily, among the creepers and broken trunks, when a bird, a vision of red and yellow, flashed upwards with a witch-like cry.
--William Golding,
Lord of the FliesSample: She was running, desperately, between the road the railroad track, after a car, her hope for escape and rescue, passed by with an oblivious driver.
Own Sentence: